Yeah, I'll have a quick look, although I may hold out 'til tomorrow if I do crit it.
Also, if you do want to do a guide to critiquing, there are a few lurking in the murky depths of the S&L forum that were done way back when APS, Morrissey and Zep2k3 were about. They might make a good starting point.
EDIT: Doublepost :upset: