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I'm taking a 'Creating Poetry' module next year which will need to include a portfolio of about 6-7 poems so I'll be posting a lot pretty soon.
 
Congratulations, Timmy. Hope you get to the top 15. Good luck.

I just thought I'd whore my band out just a bit. Most of those songs had their lyrics critiqued in S&L or the LCs so maybe you guys would like to hear how they sound. Finally got around to updating and adding some new music to it that I'm happy with.

My purevolume
 
The real problem is that the "funny" songs posted here just aren't funny. I could care less about sad/happy songs but the funny ones are always about 420 and penises and crap

Also, Weezer is basically Pavement for pussies
 
Well yeah. It's nice to have a place to dump all my miscellaneous shit, and to read stuff that doesn't require much thought. Seriously, we ought to rename it DISPOSABLE POETRY.

:)
 
You know what's lame? Spilling a Diet Coke on someone while you're training to be a server. My friend who is training with me dropped 3 waters on some ladies on the other side of the restraunt at about the same time as me, and got a much better reaction. The waitress I did a lot of work for didn't even tip me out a few bucks. Lame.
 
Nah NEW MODERATOR I SAID.

Go to that thread in the site forum and rant about we needing more people moderating to make this place a lot more active.

I can offer you pretty cookies and the opportunity to win an e-car!

^______^

Plus I have a cute labrador that barks and stuff.

On a related note, if joshmay is willing to make the workshops and shi, I'm willing to participate.
 
not really - the ones you haven't critiqued are all really old... I've not been writing much recently - got divorced and all, so tried not to write about stuff, as it'd probably come out horrendous.
 
And I'd be hated and I'd never be able to make critiques without people thinking I have my head up my a‪ss or something like that. And Jared was banned. And he is closed minded about banRAB.

He's like a mini-Burt. :')
 
yeah dude awesome advice.

since my thread got deleted, tojes if you post in dis thread plz i need the link to ur new album again, i never got around to dling it the other night and i really wanna listen to it. :(
 
Hehe!

Well it's that time of year again. Three poetry competition deadlines coming up in the next two months, one of them being a national competition. I'm still trying to decide which pieces to submit. I'd lvoe it if I could have your opinions on which I should submit (can be different for each of the competitions, though if there is one that really is better than the others I'll put that in for all).

All of the pieces are at; http://timmyjp.deviantart.com There's also my prose project on there if you're interested in taking a look.

If I shouldn't have posted this then tell me and I'll delete it.

Thanks for any help you can give :)

Timmy P
 
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