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    can i call myself a poet?

    Be kind to yourself.
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    What do you thing of that poem I Wrote .. ?

    I thing it needs a final stanza about the poem.
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    What do you thing of that poem I Wrote .. ?

    I thing it needs a final stanza about the poem.
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    Hey ladies is there anything wrong with a guy that writes poetry?

    A person becomes what his mind dwells upon. It would be wise to be cautious of poets of darkness.
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    Help title my poem or comment?

    Backslide Alley
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    In the garden of Eden?

    What makes more sense to you?
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    what do you think of my poetry?

    Excessive words and not well written. "Watches her feet journey through the sidewalk."....?? Doesn't make sense to me, as other things here.
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    What do you think of my poem (rough draft), all comments welcome.?

    Wanderin' the cross roads, not knowin' where to turn Up one hill and down another there's still more to come Which way to go? No one answers Which way to turn? I'll toss a coin Do I have it right? Is this my path in life? So many questions Not enough answers Nothing but confusion Is she the...
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    How do you like my river poem?

    I take it that Muh-he-kun-ne-tuk is the native name of a black widow?
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    Hey, Ive written another poem :)?

    You cultivated my hopes Trampled my expectations 5/10
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    What is that poem that you have to put for noises is it a found poem?

    Hey, Baby Girl... Sounds like you need a muffler.
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    What do you think of this poem I wrote?

    "I'm tired...time for a nap.... I hope you guts will understand." We, In the shadow of the leaves understand your plight. Hickory Dickory Dock The squirrel was cleaning the clock The clock struck one And the squirrel was done Hickory Dickory Dock Tick...........Tock Tick...........Tock Time for...
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    my latest poem please comment!?

    Hush Now. The thought process is at work.
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    I'm trying to write a different type of poetry...is it decent or how can I improve?

    I felt like such a cornball reading it.
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    Im not exactly a poet but i thought i would try...is this any good?

    The poem is in need of many error corrections to be competitive. Listed is two errors you may want to consider. Line 4: the earth is not sunshine. Line 16: spelling errors, should be "trees that once were there."
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