Help title my poem or comment?

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The door was left slamming,
Lives are left astray,
In the day, no reckoning,
Now in the alley,
Dark cardboard where you preside,
Left ghostly to disappear,
Working for money too dignified,
No one likes to interfere,
Don’t care to watch you backslide,
Or see the damaging,
Pushed aside, toss a dollar, I’m not snide,
No grudge,
To my deadening,
Why budge,
Just humiliating,
Your blindly eliminated.
 
Nice work!

As far as a title, I think something like "The Other Life Experience" or maybe even "Struggle for Simplicity" fits.

Kudos!
 
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