What do you thing of that poem I Wrote .. ?

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Hi my friends ... I have wrote a poem and I need you to tell me what you're thinking of it ??
here it is

My Worst Times Ever

Once I was scared, see darkness in brighten light
I thought nothing is true, nothing I did was right
I felt no time then, it was just a dark everlasting night
That was my worst times ever

Doomed blowing wind took my soul away
I had nothing to do, I had nothing to say
I felt like I'm in hell and this is my doomsday
That was my worst times ever

I was completely alone, no one was around
I couldn't call for help, my voice didn't come out
I felt no one cares about me like one dead hound
That was my worst times ever

This is not me; I'm no more the same
I can do nothing for the man I became
This is my fault I got to take the blame
And I'm still in … My Worst Times Ever

thank you all
and gimme a rating 1:10
thank you again
 
You said rate it from 1 to 10. I'd say it was better, 11.
I think it's deep, very meaningful. I can feel the emotions, exactly how I have felt before. Infact I still do. I like the way you have used rhymning couplets. It's always enjoyable to read a poem that has meaning, glad you're one of the few that can have the talent to write such. I can also relate to your poem, I like that there are others out there that can also understand your pain and share the same feelings and emotions.
Thank you for sharing us your truly beautiful poem.
 
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