what do you think of my poetry?

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It’s not something so simple,
It’s so cloudy and gray,It’s a season of thunder and pity.
It’s not passing
Hurt and loneliness,
Vanished love and sisters
Favourite games, blankets, and colours
Birth, Death, What’s in between,
Aches, pains, cuts, and bruises,
Violence, Hugs, Sorrow, blurry metaphors
Hurt, hate, forgiveness, lakes, and countries
Leaders, followers, ugly distances
Lost, lust, and conspiracies, fairytales
Beautiful friends, moons, and eclipsed hearts
Leaving, returning
Blindness, emptiness
Continents, oceans, floods, paths,
Sixth senses, vivid imaginations
Black jackets, Dark makeup
Head down, Chin up,
All that is missed,
All that is cared for
All that is blind
Life seems so black and white.
Lights turned off,
Umbrella out,
Hand and hand down Broadway,
Just like in the movies,
He’s so pretty,
She’s so handsome,
He asks, “What’s wrong?”
She looks down,
Watches her feet journey through the sidewalk,
“It’s raining on my city, and It just won’t stop.”
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im guessing you dont understand emo poetry..
the through the sidewalk thing is supposed to be abstract
 
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