I've read many books (including many religious books) but can never get very far into the Bible. Some of it is good, but some of it is terrible. It starts out terrible! (A boring list of ancestry.)
I like Ecclesiastes though.
Walking down Grandeur trail on a musty late summer evening:
a growing future at my heart,
nostalgia in my mind.
Looking down I am startled into the eternity of now:
the moon reflected in Sunlight’s eye!
how about-
replacing fan with wind, it fits in with the hills and valley better
the switch from the natural scene to the rocking cradle lullaby scene and then back to the river scene doesn't work well for me, its like you have two poems here you are trying to stitch together
Good start on 2...
Some people can make friends anywhere, some have trouble everywhere. It has more to do with YOU than where you are.
If you make friends easily in the military you probably will also in university.
This is why I can't take so called "conservatives" on Y!A seriously.
You didn't ask a legitimate question. You just made a bunch of ridiculous and hateful suppositions and tried to disguise them as a question.