Writing this as a screenwriter -- I was very disappointed with the writing. I only managed an hour.
As soon as it started I sensed this was going to fail. The character entrances did not tell us much about their persona and what they do.
Del is a wheeler-dealer type character, so why not show it in its infancy? The kid who played him was very good and deserved more to show off his obvious talent.
It's the same for the other characters, I don't know who they are except that they are trading on OFAH names. SHOW US.
The story was supposed to be about JOAN, but I couldn't really understand why we were following her. What was so great about her? I didn't get that unique perspective of her character, just someone who was struggling in a marriage.
I was more interested in DEL and his antics, in my opinion, that was where the story was, it was more fun spending time with him. I think the relationship between Del and his mother was the better story, two characters who stand by each other.
Freddy the frog was hardly intimidating, it was Rodney wearing a 'tache.
Disappointed Sullivan fan.