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Meh, might enjoy and have fun tomorrow, but I'm nerding it at the moment.

And uh we don't have a mod yet. Apparently we need to mention it constantly so it becomes true.
 
Hello guys. I'm working on more material for when I return and take what's mine, alo known as the first posting spot in this thread... of course, not doing it through spam... but through... you know. KNOWLEDGE!

Anyway..



Focus on both, maybe? And then work them out together somehow?

That does the trick for me.
 
non-linear. Besides there's a little consideration in there I forgot to mention, or can be thought however you might want to see it: He invited a large group of people, therefore, doesn't especify whether it was a personal invitation or just a mass invitation, so I can use that loop in the story to say he hadn't met me, or it can be seen as one of his moments of forgetting everything, due to the novocaine, or something around that line. The space left there is quite open for interpretation, I suppose.



Yeah, about that I got a little too excited. I changed to something warmer. :)



To denote that I am death. Maybe a bit too... hypothetical? Or maybe I wanted to add drama.

Thanks a bunch for the feedback man, I was going to make a revisal, but I will have to make a double one now, because there might be more loops in the continuity of the story itself.

Thanks a load man, I really appreciate it.
 
Sorry to interrupt the bitch fest, but this is to JoshMay if he comes on.

I spent most of tonight reading through your stuff on here and was blown away. My favourite of the work i have read so far was "the forever formula", probably some of the least abstract of your stuff but brilliant. I spent about a half hour reading through your poems and i enjoyed every minute of. I intend to read the rest of your stuff tomorrow. If you see this could you e-mail me about the possibility of purchasing a copy of your chapbook, as i live significantly far away and would like to know how much mailing would cost me.

[email protected]

Thanks :)

EDIT: I jsut realised that you are five years younger than me. I'm doubly impressed by your writing.
 
That's true. I much prefer/find it easier to write within forms and find the restraint of technical aspects to poetry really interesting to study... so it probably would be a good choice.
 
Cool, I liked that. In fact, I might actually enter the next lyrical challenge for the first time.

Ye, where has he gone too. He's now Nightvision right? I miss his crits and his work.
 
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