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It fails constantly because most users around here are not literature majors, so they don't give half a rooster about poetry or lyrics by others, others than their own, and FAST FEEDBACK OTHERWISE people get very annoyed and bump songs 10,000 times and never understand they don't get replies because they're bad at writing.

So you could try making one, but it'd fail miserably. I'd try to post in it anyway. :)
 
If you all dont mind, please crit "Graduation day" because I have to say it's one of the most emotional songs that I have written, and it would mean alot thanks.

But what I came on here to say is Zep, nice to see you back. :thumb:
 
The link's not working, but if you're talking about shape poetry like I think you are then, yeah, sure, what the hey?

I covered it a bit last semester, I'll try and dig out the notes and see what its all about.

Thanks for the song stuff, and yeah, all I use is reason. But I'm pretty sure that I'm not using it to its full extent. Its tough to figure out it, but its so in depth.
 
That should be awesome, they are good.

EDIT: First Day of My Life, Poison Oak, and Train Under Water are my favorites. and We Are Nowhere... The whole album is quite good though. I'm also very impressed with Digital Ash. Arc of Time, Gold Mine Gutted, Take it Easy, Hit the Switch, and Light Pollution are awesome. Fevers and Mirrors is still better. Do you guys like the new stuff or older more?

Ska of Dead was awesome.
 
Cheap jug wine (Carlo Rossi - paisano) Jim Beam and micro brewed beer are all i need. Bombay Gin ain't so bad either

Go review my vocals/lyrics
 
w/e tojes ur the man

why do u think they made u mod cuz YOU'RE THE MAN



i wish i had a girlfriend. some chubby hot slut wants me to go to an AA meeting with her tomorrow.... should i do it? i think she just is using that for an excuse as a date or something because she has a scene boyfriend aka gay
 
Class in a couple minutes, been drawing random parts of a rather large, pretentious piece I want to get done. Haven't written in English in like,forever, I'm rusty.
 
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