Community Thread / Tips and Questions

I has too much.

I'm writing more and more about religion and I don't know why. I'm not particularly religious. Drifting somewhere between agnosticism and aetheism, but God and religion is just really interesting.

Must. Tone. Down. Pretence.
 
Yeah, well. If you have 300,000 listens and no-one wants to sign you, then there is a reason, and it isn't lack of exposure.
 
If you want to give me one I'll be more than happy, Jason.

I'll go make some crits now that I have a little internet.

I
 
visualizin the realism my life in actuality **** who's the baddest a person's status depenRAB on salary, and my mentality is, money orientated, i'm destined to live the dream for all my peeps who never made it, cuz yeah, we were beginners in the hood as five percenters but somethin must of got in us cuz all of us turned to sinners now some, restin in peace and some are sittin in san quentin others such as myself are trying to carry on tradition, keepin the
schwepervesence street ghetto essence inside us cuz it provides us with the proper insight to guide us even though, we know somehow we all gotta go but as long as we leavin thievin we'll be leavin with some kind of dough so, and to that day we expire and turn to vapors me and my capers-ll be somewhere stackin plenty papers keepin it real, packin steel, gettin high cause life's a bitch and then you die
 
hehe. I think I support what he says.

Pretty much all the new wave writers and poets and what not really try too hard to be different.

Maybe we should all go back to actually using metric lines, and correct stanzas... Yeah sure why not. I'm up for it.
 
Hmmm I think there neeRAB to be a single thread with links to all the old stickies (Lyric Game, Tips & Questions, Songwriting 101 etc..) that would be so much more efficient, plus it means we can add as much as we like to it without the first page getting crowded...
 
Ulysses is epic. It took me ages to read. But it gives me good quotes for my facebook status

Huw is the snotgreen sea. The scrotum tightening sea.

Dostoyevski I found really dry. Only read the Idiot though. Dr Jekyll I haven't read in years and years.

Might do some critting seeing as this is the first time I've been properly sober in a week or so.

Put a new piece up. Not sure why.
 
I wish I had the patience to do things...like write a book...or a screenplay...or compose music...or stuff. I mean...I know none of it will ever get big or anything...but it'd still be nice to know I did it. lolol
 
What happened to real critiques? I've had two critiques for my song so far, and both of them weren't even a paragraph long. I'm perfectly willing to return crit people, but they have to put more effort into their posts than that...
 
We've got a jukebox in work, its connected to the internet and plays random songs. So I sit behind the bar flicking through the songs until I find something half decent then sit and do the cross word.

Work is actually pretty easy, easier than the nasty posh hotel I used to work in.

Old man pubs = win
 
I'm deep down in the back streets - in the heart of Medina About to set off something more deep than a misdemeanor Under the subway, waiting for the train to make noise So I can blast a nigga and his boys - for what? He pushed up on the block and made the dope sales drop Like the crashin of Dow Jones stock I had to connect to cross seals, to catch more mil's Than ho-bitches got birth control pills I'm in the park, settin up a deal over blunt fire Bum niggaz sleepin on the bench, they had em wired Peeped my convo, the address of my condo And how I changed a nigga name to John Doe
 
I might be a bit off 'flow' of topic, But im here trying to find a friend lol. I'm new here and need some guidance! / advice / company. Obviously with S&L in mind :( Maybe you Jason101? we have the same name irl, its already begun man - surrender.
I wont go adding random hero's, begging, I know thats straight annoying so maybe if your interested, you make first contact :wave:
ffa: [email protected]
 
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