process

[The quiet one]

there is a process to living
soft and immaculate, in
the gentle placing of
the careful rolling of
the tender wetting of
then the inhalation
a reflection of one's
reverberation


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the last two lines were troubling, what i have here is the fourth version, and i'm still not entirely comfortable with it

 

[RuptureMaster]

if this is about smoking weed than thats probably the most poetic thing anyone has ever said about smoking weed

if its not about smoking weed, i have no idea what its supposed to mean

 

[Sabrina C]

yeah haha right? If its about blazing its amazing, but either way that's what I take from it. I like how its simple, yet also full at the same time, a good short poem.

 

[lovepinkkx17]

it's not really about weed it's more just the ritual of rolling a cigarette

initially the poem had a living/dying theme to it but i decided to drop it and change the last line to something a little better worded

 

[ThE uLtImAtE cHeEz BuRgEr]

i need to start rolling my cigs.. much cheaper

 

[La Min]

yeah i did it for a while but in the end you actually smoke a shitload more

 

[kimalison11]

I should start smoking, it looks like it provokes thought.

 

[Bee :]]

it's more the fact that we smoke because our thoughts have been provoked


kitsch, i made this today, you might be interested:

http://wastefulworRAB.wordpress.com/

 

[Wes B]

going to read through all of that after class.

i need to make one of those, my poetry is all scattered.

whats that painting?

 

[joahann]

it's a cropped version of The Sea from the Heights of Dieppe from Eugene Delacroix

here it is: