impatience

[brianna_chelsea]

Fumbling with my buckle,
she murmurs
'hurry'.
Is a doctor ever
patient, in his flurry
of diagnoses,
or do his patients
fumble
and murmur
about his improper thrombosis,
or other blood induced
medical jargon?

'Did you hear?'
'I heard he slept with his patient'.
'Stop fumbling with my buckle
and finish the story'.
With downcast eyes I murmur:
'...and hurry.'

 

[kaciedeb]

thanks a lot

there is meant to be some spacing that didn't show in the post and i havent been bothered to edit it

the third line is meant to begin where the preceding line finishes, same with the ninth

 

[mlou]

this is so awesome, as always rasputin

 

[CaliforniaGrl]

thanks