Yes using that stuff can be overbearing for some people, but no. Make them hard and completely strange to make them worth reading and confusing people.
That's something I like of your pieces. Complexity.
Ok seeing as my original thread was closed and i was instructed to go and post here here i am.
I have read the rules and just wanted to double check that lyrics posted here are safe. I also wanted to say hey and i look forward to reading some songs and posting here. Loving the "warm" welcome ive received off one or two so far.