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No probs Surf...I'm gonna try get back into this critique business! Hopefully I'll get back to the good ol' 1500 word essays on the pieces that are worth it!

I tried writing...it felt so good, but I'm so ridiculously out of practice! Not a single phrase was worth more than an oxidised two pence piece :(

But hey, I WILL get back into it! And hopefully I can start writing and crit'ing a little more.

Timmy
 
At least you got yourself a girlfriend tojes, gg on that.

I'm lost as to what do to with this thing I've written, so I'll do a few crits and then post.
 
That was a very long sentence. I am viewing S&L right now.

There is a light that Never Goes Out is my song choice.

I am listening to Citizen Erased by Muse.

That will be all.
 
yes sir, mr tojes sir



all poetry should be written in and about complete depression. any thing other than tragic writing is an afront to writing itself. :)
 
Thank you Surf - a lot of what you said was spot on. Remind me to take a look at your last piece if I forget to over the next few days. :)

And hey Josh - I like your way of thinking - it's maybe about time we tried something a little different in here, as we only seem to be getting a small group of regulars. Stick around. :)
 
mwy is pretty good, but three banRAB beat them in my book

A. the Bled
B. The Blood Brothers ( old because Crimes cant touch BPIB)
C. He Is Legend
 
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