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APS, you have to come back now that I've critiqued your latest...:p

It was the first crit I've done in about a month apart from one, which I can't actually remember, I kinda enjoyed it.

Timmy
 
How come you need 500000 (can't read how many zeros that is) worRAB? Is this like for a class?

edit - I've considered writing my own novel, I have a few good ideas that I would definitely wanna make a full length novel out of. But I have neither the time, the patience, nor the writing ability to give them the treatment they deserve at this point in my life.
 
Watched City of God a couple days ago, but it was in Brazilian with no subtitles. It was still amazing. Really amazing.

But Apocolypse Now is on my list of films to see.
 
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These photos are always b&w and edited because my camera is seriously the grainiest and ugliest piece of shit ever.
 
It's kinda Massive Attack-ish... I've only listened to the first song so far. I like it. :)


EDIT: Wait.. The next song is much more folk-sy. She has a pretty voice.
 
I'm bored, and this book rules, so here's the first paragraph of Already Dead by Denis Johnson.

August 7, 1990

Van Ness felt a gladness and wonder as he drove past the small isolated towns along U.S. 101 in Northern California, a certain interest, a yearning, because he sensed they were places a person could disappear into. They felt like little naps you might never wake up from--you might throw a tire and hike to a gas station and stumble unexpectedly onto the rest of your life, the people who would finally mean something to you, a woman, an immortal friend, a saving fellowship in the religion of some obscure church. But such a thing as small as a detour into deep and permanent changes, at the time, anyway, that he was travelling down the coast fro Seattle into Mendocino County, wasn't even to be dreamt of in Van Ness's world.
 
spend some of that time critting a piece of my stuff man.. You give awesome crits, but I never see any of them on my stuff...
nah, I don't care.. don't waste your time on my latest piece..
 
No offence taken.

I know you have to be stern in here because there are a lot of stupid wankers that don't take 5 seconRAB of their time to read rules or even take a look at their grammar or even to get some commas and perioRAB to make sense.

That's what makes you a great mod, and you know it.

P.S. That wasn't ass kissing, in case you thought it was. It was something out of my head, anyhow. :D
 
Aye, it seems to be good poetry or crappy songwriting at the moment. I find that I naturally write poetry, this is partly because I can never seem to fit my writing into a structure that is necessary for a lyrical piece.

I should try some Haikus and other different types of poetry for a change.

As long as I don't start writing shape poems I'm fine within myself!!!!!

Get well soon Tojes, I'm just recovering from the bug that seems to be going around at the moment.

Timmy P
 
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