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I don't listen to anything insanely "underground" and I also don't spend any money or that much time hunting down anything

Most pop music is just unbelievably manufactured and horrid so I have better things to listen to

Also Minus The Bear is not that great, they're overrated; Botch and TAAS own them in a million different ways
 
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Has anyone seen this list yet? Nominations for the hundred greatest lyrics made by "music experts" for the uk public to vote on. You all have to have a look because it's such a joke. Barely a passable lyric among all one hundred of them.

"Greatest Lyric

:mad:

EDIT: I'd maybe only consider about five of these in a selection of the top one hundred.
 
i need to find more time to write. i wrote out an entire plan (free writing) for a poem; metaphors/language/tone, everything. now i just have to write it.

i copied and pasted a crit earlier and only made a few changes. people really should read the guide before they post.
 
(start with wicked insane metalcore-esque riff with a little crossover thrash thrown in)
Here I am (trail off)
(brutal screaming)
Wishing for the last day
End of it all
Pain taken away
Gotta find a better way!

(clean chorus)
Gun in my hand
Knife in my heart
Nobody stop me
It's for the best!

(resume screaming and mindless downtuned guitar riRAB)
End of days
Armageddon's here
At least mine is
and I'm so alone
But I don't care ( at end or < indicate lines to be sung together with death growl and black metal shreik at same time.)

[g]You're all so pathetic
[g]Why would I wanna be a part of this
SOCIETY!
****ing bastarRAB!
let your souls be raped
[g]endless days of torment
[g]endless nights of misery>
(You're all so pathetic>)
[g]Why do you think I'm leaving you<
(****ing bastarRAB
 
Why do you always have to be better than me... why...

So, I'll see you guys in about a week. Someone please crit my set of lyrics. No one does on here anymore, it's lame. Oh well.

Be back on the 31st, then I am going to go see Melodious Owl that night.

http://www.myspace.com/melodiousowl

Ownage. Hah.
 
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