Community Thread / Tips and Questions

APS has many pieces on page one, there are tons of EmokiRAB posting their offerings, we seem to be currently modless, as Burt is mysteriously absent and avoidant, and I have totally run dry on inspiration and haven't posted anything in a long while, despite that my last offering fell down the page faster than a brick off of a building. In fact, I've been on total S&L hiatus for a while, considering the quality of what's been posted and my lack of offerings in return. They're thinking of Supermodding DFelon temporarily until a permanent Mod can be found.

That answer your question, sir?
 
Speaking of ghost towns, anyone seen Silent Hill? The acting and writing was terrible, but the special effects, music, and set designs were incredible.
 
It's very good actually. I met a girl who's into Classic Rock, and I thought "Oh man she's the one".

But I haven't talked to her in person. She added me or something and that's about it.
 
Thanks a bunch. I'm getting a lot of feedback regarding detail so I'll be sure to add some then. I can definitely see what you all are getting at. I was just really unsure as to the quality because I basically dumped it out ASAP. (Hence the lack of detail). I think part of the laziness is probably also me still being bitter about it and not wanting to go back and touch on the good, but you're right that I do so...painful writing here I come. :)
 
I hate to be a bore because most of this stuff has already been said, but can anyone suggest anygood ways of writing good, mellow acoustic riRAB and simple lyrics to accompany because I've got a party with some mates soon and someone always brings out the guitar.

Thanks
 
It feels like every thread I read, there is rarely one good crit, even on a decent song.

I would do something about it, but at this point I can't be bothered.

Maybe I'm just seeing the past with rose-tinted glasses though. Perhaps things were this bad back in December.
 
well tbh i want all my lyrics in one thread and my joindate is older than you so I don't really think its a problem.

I'm not asking you to crit all my lyrics but I'd prefer all my lyrics to be in one porfolio rather than strewn around the forum.
 
Oh man. Chinese food is amazing.

My girlfriend is to paranoid about eating a lot... so I feel bad when we go out to chinese buffets. We went to one on Valentines day because Applebee's was full. Haha. We could have waited around... but I would rather have had General Tsou Chicken, or whatever they call it.

I have to give a demonstrative speech Thursday for my Public Speaking class. I think I plan on telling people how to make a good house out of Legos for 6 minutes. If anyone has any better ideas, let me know. :)

My other one was making tea... Boiling water for a few minutes then drinking it. Probably talking about it while I made it, but still. Tea rocks.
 
I work seafood at a grocery store, and you don't want to know how long my manager let that fish sit in the case.

New store opens Monday, so I get to hang out there from now on.
 
This place has been dead as hell lately

But please feel free to write stuff and critique other people so long as you read the rules

We need more active people :|
 
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