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I'll be checking that it will be followed as if it were inscripted in stone. ;)

I'll be using it, although maybe it will be a regs-only usage, if you ask me.
 
Regarding the short story:

I generally liked it, you could have gone into greater detail on a few occasions...just because it's a short story doesn't mean it has to use as little description as possible.

I think you should elaborate more on the period of time they were "in love." It just seems to build up to that, mentions it briefly, then enRAB. If you talked about things they enjoyed doing together while they were love, you know...a little more passion, romance, things that will make us go "awwww...they really are in love!" That way, when it enRAB, it seems much more devastating...since (at this point in time) we never really had a lot of time to actually care/become interested in them or their relationship.

I'd definitely keep it, do not scrap it! I like the concept of him realizing that love is very real and very possible, and you wrote that part well. You just sorta lazied off once they actually fell in love.
 
That is a strange dream... my older brother, the crazy one, was wearing nothing but white athletic socks and women's underwear in my dream.

So yeah.
 
I promised myself I'd stay away from liquor for a little while, there was a time where I punished myself with it. So now I only party with beer, but that won't last too incredibly long. Beer's just fun, feels like you're always doin somethin'.
 
Well, because the LC neeRAB more actual modding than the forum proper does. I'd like to see them more in here too, but they don't have to be to be effective moRAB, so that's how it goes. As long as the job is getting done I don't think it matters that much does it?
 
I've never written drunk, usually when I'm depressed (properly depressed, not what everyone seems to think is depressed now a days. I was diagnosed with depression by a doctor after my dad died.).

Sometimes I write when I'm really happy, they're usually the pieces with no point but to create an image.

Hope you're all well

Timmy
 
Ug, I've actually been busy in the last few days.

In response to this, I shall be critting soon. As usual, I will be going for quantity of crits rather than quality. This means you; tojes, TBM and minus.


Also



You sucked during the beach, but gg on the departed.
 
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