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Bear Down, Chicago Bears.
Make every play clear the way to victory!
Bear Down, Chicago Bears.
Put up a fight with a might so fearlessly!

We'll never forget the way you thrilled the nation,
With your T formation.

Bear Down, Chicago Bears.
And let them know why you're wearing the crown.

You're the pride and joy,
of all Illinois.

Chicago Bears, Bear Down!

*****

It's my latest, what do you all think? I'm looking for feedback from Arizona fans mostly....My dear sweet bears have done it again..
 
Being a Bright Eyes fan boy (according to one member), my favorite album at the moment is Bright Eyes - Digital Ash

The Arcade Fire - Funeral Comes in second, and I'm Wide Awake It's Morning comes in third.
 
Sure why not. :)

I like the intro... pretty dark. I'm not into punk a lot... The vocals seems a bit too forced, though. Not the adding of them, just the singer is stretching way too much.

I'll give it a more through later, ok? :)
 
K go. I shouldn't advocate just posting somewhat generic replies but so many pieces suffer from the same problems. At least try to get to the end of some of them.
 
Props to Dfelon for creating a way that will hopefully get people (including me) off their backsides and doing some indepth crits without worrying about not getting the same treatment in return. However i do agree that a lot of people won't have time, but hey, if you're "serious about your shit" you'll make the time.
 
I've never entered a challenge but perhaps it's time for a change.

APS, i think we should either -

- Purge S&L
- Teach the majority of it's current inhabitants not to be n00dz.
 
(randomly butts into whatever conversation/s is/are going on...)

Hey guys...I just posted a new piece.. It's a ****ty freewrite for my writing class (which is about all I post nowadays) ... you should crit it :thumb:

thanks again slackjaw... cheers :chug:
 
I usually like reading, but I don't like when I'm too hooked up.... which happens very often, and I keep reading and reading until I finish a good chapter or two... Other thimes I'm lazy and stop in the middle of something.

I should get back to reading more. I need to clear my mind and start doing mentally productive things.
 
I'm atrocious at it, i end up with an awkward silence. and just edge away to the bar...

s'way i haven't had a girlfriend in like a year or something.

i shall have to go on facebook and track down potential victims

and dancing milk avatar ftw

edit: dammit stop the lies, it is not that easy
 
You use full quotes for movies.

Hm. My band is playing tommorow for a birthday deal, haha. The guitarist is having his b-day party and Twig (our friend) is having it at the same time.

Twill be cool. We have two songs done.

Not bad for only being together a little over a month. Like 5-6 practices I bet we have had.

Wanna know how cool we are? We are on myspace. http://www.myspace.com/embracingyesterday

And we arent an emo band... although the cliche name would imply such a thing. I wasnt part of the naming process, and I dont really care. Jerks.

Yeah. I am doing college for my senior year. PSEO. Yeah bebeh.

Other than that, HEY.
 
AH yes, thirdeye, the return of some of my old frienRAB :). You know sparky right?...he's not really around anymore. Corrupt is deffinately a cool guy though, by the way where have you been for so long?
 
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