Community Thread / Tips and Questions

[fabuqueen]

Subtle isn't around, otherwise he'd of ripped apart that monstrousity that Love2Lust put up. Everyone is praising it without noting the awful word usage, syntax, poor development of mood, lack of insight, or decent rhyme.

 

[jobie g]

I don't generally like jap animation, but this one was OK

 

[Mar Star]

maybe if you didn't post shitty threaRAB i dunno

 

[Laurennn_Ox]

Dylan wrote alot of rubbish as well tbh.

But when he was in the zone, the worRAB surrounding the rhymes were so good it didn't really matter.

e.g. Visions of Johanna

 

[cherry clairey]

hah, loon he is.

so when are you posting your next piece jason?

edit: also, I'm happy to see more and more actual poetry, e.g: haikus. We should make a haiku thread so the pages aren't cluttered with 1 haiku per post. take it of leave it. I'd be happy to start one.

 

[kirstyyy :)]

I did... I thought the guy was hilarious as well.

I am going to die now. Fosherious. Bye.

 

[emoangel]

eating chocolate

 

[Yves Saint Laurant]

Write a short story about your user title... a poem maybe? Make a poem telling the story of 'The Chosener' it's pure gold...

 

[helensh]

oh. i uh. i uh. i uh. i uh.

i uh. i uh.

i need to go check what my eightball thinks.

 

[-love-is-tokio-hotel-]

Yeah, Burt actually is pretty good-looking. I was surprised.

Also, on a side note, I love the work that Burt put up on his PureVolume. Really interesting, ambient, and powerful.

 

[stillheartherain]

My imager isn't surreal, it's so real.

 

[forever23]

Ugh, high school. I dropped out and got my GED senior year. High school blows.

 

[shayshay115]

Yes, those sound like women to me. Unfortunately it's something to do with having a clitoris, I think. It makes them moody and evil.

 

[Gremlin]

I'm sorry if this was asked, but is bumping your piece still allowed?

 

[irishmom91562]

Where abouts in England you heading to DR?

I haven't been around much in the last week or so, I've had a sudden loss of inspiration. Though it's beginning to come back, should get some crits in later this evening

Timmy

 

[LINDSAY HEMNES]

cool.

i thought they were just waiting on the moRAB to get round to it?

lead the way tojes, light up the problem like a lightning flash.

/paraphrasing lenin

 

[bo_dontno]

Aaaaaa, I still can

 

[Your Sister in Islam]

I wrote a paper on "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" and his futility in lack of action as per Chaos Theory in my freshman year of college. The professor gave me a C-.

 

[AuroraGlow]

I havn't written anything in a long time....it's probably cuz i'm up at school now. I have the time, really, I just don't have the energy slash will....

 

[nisar j]

Yeh, thats exactly what I heard from one of the people that works with me. For a couple months she dreaded coming in, then something just clicked and everything became simple and easy. I hope that comes round for me, because that weekend was hard.