Community Thread / Tips and Questions
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grayhalo13
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I've been writing.
I mean:
"Lady sue,
Lady dressed in blue"
is probably the only line I've really come up with over the time, really, thinking of a funk/jazz kind of vibe, but since the whole idea isn't structured or anything like that, then al I can really say is I'm attempting to enter pop rock melodies. You know, to sell myself out.
That and a really, really awful death-metal, cannibal-corpse-esque lyric that just doesn't deserve going out to the public.
I mean:
"Lady sue,
Lady dressed in blue"
is probably the only line I've really come up with over the time, really, thinking of a funk/jazz kind of vibe, but since the whole idea isn't structured or anything like that, then al I can really say is I'm attempting to enter pop rock melodies. You know, to sell myself out.
That and a really, really awful death-metal, cannibal-corpse-esque lyric that just doesn't deserve going out to the public.
Yeah I'd do it now, but I'm just about to go out. Posting to fill up some time before my friend picks me up.
I've got five weeks off for the holiday. Need to stay at home until my loan comes through otherwise I'm ****ed for money. SO I figure I'll get alot of work done while I'm here.
I've got five weeks off for the holiday. Need to stay at home until my loan comes through otherwise I'm ****ed for money. SO I figure I'll get alot of work done while I'm here.
permafrost
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I always thought of you more like a punk/emo/hardcore kind of guy. :-/
Glad you're not.
Glad you're not.
james150687
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Oh my. Talk about dead. I remember when people used to post in this thread. 
[email protected]
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It sucks, because everybody I used to know here is gone.
It's like being the new kid at school, you know? Only, it's elementary school, you're 39, and it's the same school you went to when you were in 5th grade.
It's like being the new kid at school, you know? Only, it's elementary school, you're 39, and it's the same school you went to when you were in 5th grade.
Anne Boylen
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Fine, fine, I'll DL it right now. 
Does it have Monticello on it?
Does it have Monticello on it?
QueenOfChaos
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June Paik is a good band. I don't like toast. Jason should change his name back to Jason101. I might give some critiques.
Top o' the morning to you, Jazzy.
Eh I've more or less stopped writing lyrics. And I've stopped reading a lot of the works around here... it might just been backward thinking but it seems like quality has been deteriorating beyond any reconciliable point - you would think that as time goes on, people in general would be improving as writers, yeah? They gain skill, they gain life experience, they learn what works and what doesn't... but the writing around these parts is dismal, on the whole.
Maybe I'm just being too cynical, I don't know. But I don't like much of what I've seen in the first two-thirRAB of 2005 here.
Eh I've more or less stopped writing lyrics. And I've stopped reading a lot of the works around here... it might just been backward thinking but it seems like quality has been deteriorating beyond any reconciliable point - you would think that as time goes on, people in general would be improving as writers, yeah? They gain skill, they gain life experience, they learn what works and what doesn't... but the writing around these parts is dismal, on the whole.
Maybe I'm just being too cynical, I don't know. But I don't like much of what I've seen in the first two-thirRAB of 2005 here.
parkfieldnr16
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http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=327808
Whoring out for crits from people who won't give me tens
Whoring out for crits from people who won't give me tens
lord_abortion_616
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y'know that time late at night when the air crackles with inspiration and you have to write? Well it's that time again for me, but I'm listening to Dylan, and I can't write and listen to music at the same time. So I'm gonna have to skip this masterpiece.
I'm not looking for advice, or sympathy, or tough love, I just thought I'd say this.
-Eran
Quote of the Day:
"Politics is a game, open your eyes and see the real world outside."
Anon.
I'm not looking for advice, or sympathy, or tough love, I just thought I'd say this.
-Eran
Quote of the Day:
"Politics is a game, open your eyes and see the real world outside."
Anon.