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I'd make a blog but I don't see the point

I have to keep a writing journal this year, which is pretty much similar. i have to write down my thoughts and stuff like that. Then it gets assessed for my course.

Also: William Burroughs is my new favourite person, brilliant writing.
 
Decent start, but it sounRAB..."forced" kind of. It just seems sloppy, but a few minor polishes and it'll be on its way. What program are you using? Fruity Loops ... etc? or are you using a keyboard or something? I dabble in electronica with FL but I always exit/not saving my work cuz it enRAB up sucking...we should collab :p
 
you were right, both what you and storm in a tea cup were free verse, but not free writing, which is what sixstringking said was without themes, often the exact opposite, being an intense dwelling on one subject.

there were some good lines in those few stanzas you posted; but there's a bit of cliche in there as well....
 
I've never been in love (is 17). So I have to write about anything besides love. I've done political, and I love songs that are metaphors. I tend to write expansive, story-telling epics. That, or I write songs that deal with the emotional forces in life, such as angst and ennui.
 
Ow!

Everybody say when you hear the call
You got to get it underway,
Word up, it’s the code word,
No matter where you say it,
You’ll know that you’ll be heard.


Definitely not the saddest song in the world

My fingers are sore because I've been trying to learn sunshine of your love, but its going well so its worth the pain
 
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