Community Thread / Tips and Questions

No, we want to keep the critting going, so please continue to post at least a crit per every song. We do have much more respect for those who do extra critiques though, since they are usually regs or vets.
 
I have connections.

Everyone try not to be dumbass spammers in here or Subtle will ban you.

This isn't the "I walked the dog, my name is Morrissey and I'm a girl" thread, it's to establish conversation about S&L related topics. If you want to be a worthless piece of shit, go to the pit.

So, anyway. Who enjoys the new Bright Eyes album?
 
Aigh, informal help not in the form of a thread.

I have no idea where this is going, it may even be finished, I just started this five-minutes ago and let myself fly and made each and every line seven syllables, but I don't know if it's nonsense, or not.

Sifting through broken valleys
Bitterness runs off the tongue
Racing along a dream of
Facing all that ruins the
Same game face that courses through

Veins take up root; cement in
Soil kicks up and leaves this plane
Taking with it innocence
Of broken and scarred body

Hurting the ones who only
Cared for wherever we were
They lie scattered, nearly bare
Making paper planes to throw
Fitting them with pilots sparred

Now we glade across the ice
Like small tambourines dying
A sound so naked to ears
We share same catastrophes
 
im a realitvely new song writer and most of what i write is ****, in fact i don't even call the pieces i think are good songs

i do however have one question, why do most songs in S&L revolve around girls, love and/or hate?

i see it in what i write and i see it in the majority of songs written here, is there any reason for it other than the fact that they're the most dominant song writing subjects?

and, are there any tips to getting round this sort of linear thinking?
 
Nice.

I want an amp but the ones around here suck really bad, the best I can get is a 15 watt Marshall, and I've read only bad things about it.

So I'll just wait and buy it somewhere else.
 
I'm the only new mod choice ever.

Because I've got inside connections and all.

/lies

Burt, you should get the new Patton record of me sometime. Iz sooo bad.
 
=/

More people should care. And its no good if no one actually reaRAB the thing you're published in.

And then you look stupid if you're showing everyone a random magazine.

Its a catch 22.

No one'll pay attention until you're published, and when you're published no one reaRAB it.
 
I feel I could pull off a song parodying the lack of creativity pretty well. And of course I'd avoid getting too carried away.:thumb:
 
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