Community Thread / Tips and Questions

I hate to be an advertisement, but could somebody give me some feedback on my piece, "nobody in love listens to metallica". I've had it up for several days, done like 4-5 crits and haven't received anything back. I want to polish this up for use on tuesday, so i'd really appreciate it if someone could give it a look. I'll also look at anything you'd like in exchange.
 
hey...whoever..

I haven't been around for a WHILE.. Where is everyone? Who are the regulars now?

Is there anything out there worth reading and critting?
 
Hey you guys im new to these Forums and I really want everyone to hear our music...we are not catagorized as anything because we dont want to be limited but I really want everyone to tell us want they think we REALLY need feedback

myspace.com/kanashibari

the singing is me I know its not great im still working alot on my voice but hear the lyrics and the music is beautiful!

Thank you so much guys!!

(if you could feedback on our page and rate if you can)
 
Jason...

you fucking confuse me.

So I've been reading "The sumemr of the barshinkeys"... cool book. :thumb:
 
I didn't mean to say understand them as in meaning but understand them as in actually hearing the worRAB for what they are because some of their songs it's hard to make alot what they saying/singing/screaming whatever

anyways ATC thanks for the suggestions
 
do you write your songs in the thread making window :confused: ? I'd suggest putting them on paper or at least on a notepad on your desktop or in a folder.


EDIT: I'm thinking of posting a piece I've written kind of narrating a past childhood experience, but it's only really narrating what a girl I was with is doing, seeing, writing, etc. I'm not so sure if everyone would understand it, someone decide for me.
 
I sat down and forced myself to write last night, please remind me never to do it again...it's scary!

Then again, I did actually get something right at the end of the session. After two hours of sitting and writing a load of absolutely rubbish, inspiration finally hit. It looks like it'll be a bit of an epic, so I won't post it at the moment, I'll let it run some of it's course first.

Bit different to what I usually write, little bit quirky.

Hope you're all well, good to hear that you haven't dissapeared of the face of the earth Jason. FA, try us...

Timmy
 
heh, yeah... I've been getting back into the flow of things recently. I have to admit I've had a quick read through tonight's, but there's nothing I really fancy critting... I'm pretty tired - it's 4am. :(
 
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