Can you please provide some feeback on my short poem?

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Michael

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It's alright. Poetry is one of those things where you either have it or you don't. I mean. This is mediocre to me. I'm not saying you're a bad writer, but this poem didn't stand out among the others I've been reading. But don't stop writing. Keep writing, you'll only grow in time. If you'd like me to read anything else, or if you're looking for more feedback, email me at [email protected].
 
I weathered

The delirium gave way to misery
A period of gray clouds ensued
Shrouding the bright, warm rays
Short and still were the days

Starless nights provided no relief
To my grief
Despite the moon shining high
In its celestial seat

Comfort sought in the rain,
Endless prayers all in vain
Washed away this wasted heart
But there seemed no new start
Micheal, thank you for the honest criticism. I am pretty new to this poetry thing.
 
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