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It is okay, but I think you could have done better I love that you put your feelings into it then toward the end i think you used too much thought

Do you want critisicm? tsunamis are warmer than cold (frosting blasts) , but I like the concept. Unless they occur in New England. Other than that, I thought it was a good suicidal type deppressive poem. But it was very creative and heartfelt