Is this poem ANY good?

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You are the spirt to me, that ONLY you may be.
You are my passion, my pity, and my soul.
You are my love, as you are thy lady dearest to thee.
You are me, as I am you, and that shall forever be.
You show me kindness that others dare not, because they don't see the good in me.
You have a heart of solid gold, and a soul as pure as tulips are red.
You ARE my life, and that shall forever be, for I shall always think of you so.
-----POEM by: Jonathan (14)
 
It is okay, but I think you could have done better
I love that you put your feelings into it
then toward the end i think you used too much thought
 
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