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    My newest poem is worth 20 points?

    Sounds a little like sexie time XD No, seriously. It sounds like you have been through a committed relationship and then either one of you ends up rubbish in bed and you don't want to be with each other anymore... That's my portrayal of it anyway, haha
  2. T

    I am new to the whole poetry thing and could you please, please tell me

    I like it, it gets the message across very well, it's quite emotional really.
  3. T

    Needing help on poetry!?

    It is effective because it means they sopke so beautifully to each other it was like the music from a string instrument, a harp maybe, or a guitar. To speak to each other like this shows love and a trusting in each other. :)
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    new poem what do you think?

    That is very sad, almost made me cry. It is excellent, touches the heart :(
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