I like it, I think it's good and that you should keep on writing.
Just keep writing, throw it all into a box or drawer until later when you need it (for publishing!).
I'll tell you what!
Isn't he lucky you haven't knocked him upside his head and laughed him all the way down the road.
Yes, he has a charming, sweet and loving side. So what? He doesn't value it enough to develop it into the major drive of his personality. Further, he is like a teenage boy who...