i wrote this poem last night while listening (and partially falling asleep) to the album Adore by smashing pumpkins, tell me what you think. and if you can, tell me the meaning of the poem that you think its correct:
SpaceGirl
thru the space and the flute they
fly free. dark juice and gasoline. and
she is shaking, what do we mean?
maybe they cant stop because the
stars arent shining. but the darkhole may
be bright if you close your eyes and
sing with me.
and in the middle of the nowhere of my
hands she is sleeping quietly. hover crossed
hair in between my fingers and i am smiling.
and if i ever close my eyes i will panic for her life.
cause not even the poison can make me alive, again.
she is my spacegirl and my rocket to the moon.
as we fuel the engines, she shows me something new.
she locks the door, sits down on the floor and inhale.
and through the stars and all the mass we choke up
silently. i fall asleep, i cant wake up im screaming
desperately. if i open my eye what nightmares will i
find?... she was left me, im alone and now i feel sad.
i feel sad. i feel sad...
because the poison cant make me... alive... again
SpaceGirl
thru the space and the flute they
fly free. dark juice and gasoline. and
she is shaking, what do we mean?
maybe they cant stop because the
stars arent shining. but the darkhole may
be bright if you close your eyes and
sing with me.
and in the middle of the nowhere of my
hands she is sleeping quietly. hover crossed
hair in between my fingers and i am smiling.
and if i ever close my eyes i will panic for her life.
cause not even the poison can make me alive, again.
she is my spacegirl and my rocket to the moon.
as we fuel the engines, she shows me something new.
she locks the door, sits down on the floor and inhale.
and through the stars and all the mass we choke up
silently. i fall asleep, i cant wake up im screaming
desperately. if i open my eye what nightmares will i
find?... she was left me, im alone and now i feel sad.
i feel sad. i feel sad...
because the poison cant make me... alive... again