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Antony Copland

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"Old School/New School"

Everybody clap one time for the old school
Yeah
Now step one time for the old school

Bring it back now
DJ switch it up
We're gonna back it up
Gonna have a little fun
Y'all relax your mind
For a minute a two
Let your body and mind
Feel the groove
Allow me to set the mood
For you and yours
Loungin' around as the rain pours
Hittin' the floor like a bass drum
This is for the old school
We call this the throwback
Back before we were taught to
"Lean Back"
No autotune man
Just a microphone and turntables
Enough to turn the tables on the rap (game)
Nowadays every song sounds the same
Like one artist wrote them all
Under pseudo names
All we hear is money stacked (high)
What cars they (drive)
How they into a (fight)
While the old school is
Feelin' alri-ight

Now everybody from the old school
Clap your hands one time
Clap your hands two times
Feelin' alri-ight

Now everybody from the old school
Step one time
Step from side to side
Feelin' alri-ight

DJ switch it up on 'em

New school here we go
Are you ready
Here we go

Now everybody from the new school
Let me see you get on the floor
Put your drinks on the table
Dance with me til the mornin' sun
I know you wanna get to dancin'
I know you wanna move your feet
So get out your chair
Get on over there
N' move it to the beat
Feel it poundin' like a heart
Movin down to your feet
The sound is unique
Blending old school
With the new school
There's no tellin'
What we're gonna do
One things for sure
We'll be feelin' the groove

Old School!
Clap your hands

New School!
Clap your hands

Old School
New School

Old, New
Old, New

Wooooo
 
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