missxoxmassacre
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any suggestions? I know it sounds horrible, but it's not.
The books genre is romance/suspense.
In the book, the two characters make love on their prom night for the first time.
Now I know some people who write adult books would use all types of words to describe it.
But I need an appropriote way, to get across what's going on in the scene and what's happening, but not plain out writing "He stuck his dick in me for the first time."
I want it to basically have the reader know what's going on, but not plainly stating it bluntly.
Any suggestions on how to go about this?
thx.
-JM<3
The books genre is romance/suspense.
In the book, the two characters make love on their prom night for the first time.
Now I know some people who write adult books would use all types of words to describe it.
But I need an appropriote way, to get across what's going on in the scene and what's happening, but not plain out writing "He stuck his dick in me for the first time."
I want it to basically have the reader know what's going on, but not plainly stating it bluntly.
Any suggestions on how to go about this?
thx.
-JM<3