rubypalma11
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a rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg a metrr of iambic penta meter its about death and leaving your wife and daughter be hind any line,sugestions here is what I have so far
When you departed from the world beneith you.
Their will be much sorrow for you have left.
Every day will grow long for you are threw.
You suffered mindless hours till your death.
For when you took your last breath you felt confined.
Before your death you felt scared and alone.
Your wife and daughter cant beleive their mind.
Their emotions so strong cant be shown.
thats all I have so far I have abab and cdcd I just need efef and gg any sugestions and fir who dont know what a meter if iambic pentameter its a fancy way of saying 10 syllables per line.
When you departed from the world beneith you.
Their will be much sorrow for you have left.
Every day will grow long for you are threw.
You suffered mindless hours till your death.
For when you took your last breath you felt confined.
Before your death you felt scared and alone.
Your wife and daughter cant beleive their mind.
Their emotions so strong cant be shown.
thats all I have so far I have abab and cdcd I just need efef and gg any sugestions and fir who dont know what a meter if iambic pentameter its a fancy way of saying 10 syllables per line.