would you think any of these poems are good to say the least?

[Steph]

The title faith really suits the first one, it makes total sense. I'm not sure what you should call the second one though. In the last one, boy, I really liked the last two sentences.

Good job, I enjoyed them

 

[Kyuubi]

this one is about god i called it faith
the seeds of evil in your mind
have made your eyes go blind
to not see the hatred within
it lurks growing hiden
making your love wear thin
making you accept the lies
as your own soul dies
you can't do anything
no one hears your cries
nobody,no one,nothing
can help you get out of this maze
your heart starts to set ablaze
the light will shine upon you
and besiech you with its holyness
it will guide you
take away your restlessness
you will see with your mind
as you close your eyes
you will no longer be blind
and the bad memories die
all those lies,all those cries
have all been heard
and god has heard
he has spoken his word
and saved your soul
in his hands you are
and nobody can take you away from what you are
just believe,open your eyes,have trust,
don't believe the lies,the fakeness,the lust
and god will let you see a clearer world
just have faith

idk what to call this one i just wrote it blankly

i can hear the call of the dead
what could all of this had lead
i yell out and scream for help
only to find out no one there
i look at my time with great regret
as i watch my last sun set
savoring my last moments
as i hear the echos of my death
come closer...


eyes give illusions of love
the raven disguised as a dove
the vultures acting like swans
the chess player uses his pawns
the hands move the puppets
to put on a show
the act so real
no one would know
i try to see with my mind
but the facts collide with illusions
the both so intertwined
the microscope can't see so far
my mind lost in a maze
trying to figure out a way
a sightless man trying to find the exit
i have become useless
without my eyes to tell me where im going
i can't trust my eyes
i can't trust the world
they only give me lies
giving me illusions of love
i can't distinguish push from shove...



i scream and i yell to find a way out
waiting for someone to answer
i hear the silence giving a shout
telling me no one is there
my voice becomes insignificant
i can't have what i need,what i want
i feel like my voice is on mute
someone put my voice out of use
i can tell my respect and dignity
falling like the rain in great quantity
at the end of the storm
i am flooded with my own words
apart from the maze
i flood with nothing to say
no mater how much i scream and i yell
there is no way out...




i taste my blood,sweat,and tears
the hate,madness, and fears
my corruption,sadness,and insanity
my difference,thoughts,and inhumanity
my goals,dreams,and nightmares
the eyes,glances and glares
all remembered when i drink my wine
filled with blood,sweat,and tears...



i smell my soul burning up
the heat intensifies over the fire
i smell my shame,hate,sadness,and madness
i smell the wine pouring into a glass
the diner getting ready
i'm the prime meal of the day
my past ready to eat me up
i smell my defeat,i give up
i die in the fire burning up
ready to be eaten by my past
they smell the well cooked soul...

an this one is called the boy

the boy with no life
holding his heart eaten by the night
he cries in his lonesome room
but from his friends never acts gloom
lying to himslef how happy he is
but knows very well about the lies he gives
telling everyone he is alright
only to cry that very same night
the boy does nothing to what he is
from day to day he lives
only regreting to the nothing he has become
hoping for one day his life to be done
the boy never had a chance to live
only the sight of what it ment to be alive
to something he never had he could never miss
with that he was just living a lie
afraid to express himself
his life was the same as the books in the shelves
never seen,never read
never heard of,a life almost dead
one day to have found love
in the sight of the white beautiful dove
he chased it through the skies
only finding a white flower petal in flight
dissapointed in what a fool he was being
the boy walked away covering his eyes
if only the boy started seeing
the girl too shy and dim
too afraid to even talk to him
finally able to overcome her shyness
the boy started walking into the darkness
the girl so impatient,she couldn't wait
only to see her decision was all too late



idk if there any good tell me what you think