Joceline S
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About a 19 year old boy named Vlad Castello in 1753. His family (mom, dad, 15 year old sister) is violently killed by a group of immortals. He gets so furious that he tells the ruler of the underworld (Agratius) where all evil exists to kill these immortals. Agratius says he will kill them only if he can make him immortal as well, and the catch is that the next person he falls in true love with will descend in to the underworld for all of eternity to be Agratius’s wife. He is so full of vengeance that he accepts, without thinking of the consequences.
The story starts in 1990 when Vlad and his best immortal friend are being chased by a group of hunters and they teleport to their hometown - Paris. They then meet up with their only human friend Noah and take residence in his mansion (he is very rich, Roberta once saved his life by teleporting him and he owes her). Vlad starts falling for a self-centered, seductive, greedy girl named Juliette Girard. He meets her at an elite cruise ship masquerade ball that he was forced to attend with Noah. He finds her mysterious because he is a lot like her (starting to become evil, self centered, greedy, mean although he was kind before but because he is immortal his soul is being sucked out of him).
At first he thinks she is also immortal because of her witty meanness, but it turns out that she’s not. She is rich and spoiled, but later turns out that she is adopted and her stepfather physically abuses her (he has drinking problem, stepmother doesn’t care, adopted her because they couldn’t have kids and she is maids daughter, maid died in labor). Her father has a drinking problem because he was in love with the maid but she chose another poor man therefore he hates Juliette but his wife wanted to keep her because she wanted children. Vlad has been close to falling in love many times but always had to run before people realized he was immortal therefore never had the chance to fall in true love.
CONCEPT:
The immortals only “power” is to teleport, which takes a minute to do giving enemies time to kill them. This can also drastically weaken them. They can teleport someone else as well if they hold that persons blood in their hands.
Agratius creates immortals every full moon because it gives him enough strength to evade dreams (finds good people and turns them in their dream). The longer they are immortal the meaner they get until there is no life or soul left in them and all they want to do is kill (takes about 300 years to have no soul).
Only way for Agratius to not turn to ash in the underworld (burn) is to create an immortal every full moon, he also needs their souls to feed on.
Hunters try to find and kill all immortals (which can be detected with a crystal sphere that was invented by a crazy man (Vlad’s ancestor) in 1542). The crystal sphere lets out a high pitched noise when near an immortal that only the person holding it can hear.
Vlad’s father was the lead hunter, and this is why he knew about Agratius and other hunters, he was supposed to be the next lead hunter. He was not at home when they were killed and that was why he didn’t die in the first place.
The only way to speak to Agratius is to go to a loved ones’ grave on a full moon and say “Agratius, I know you are with us, I know that you live, I beg for a word with you, I swear I will give” and he will appear in your mind as you black out (in a dream like state).
Vlad’s family was murdered partially because immortals had no soul left in them and also because his father had the sphere because it was passed down to generations and Agratius sent them to steal it, but he had hid it away and they never found it.
The story starts in 1990 when Vlad and his best immortal friend are being chased by a group of hunters and they teleport to their hometown - Paris. They then meet up with their only human friend Noah and take residence in his mansion (he is very rich, Roberta once saved his life by teleporting him and he owes her). Vlad starts falling for a self-centered, seductive, greedy girl named Juliette Girard. He meets her at an elite cruise ship masquerade ball that he was forced to attend with Noah. He finds her mysterious because he is a lot like her (starting to become evil, self centered, greedy, mean although he was kind before but because he is immortal his soul is being sucked out of him).
At first he thinks she is also immortal because of her witty meanness, but it turns out that she’s not. She is rich and spoiled, but later turns out that she is adopted and her stepfather physically abuses her (he has drinking problem, stepmother doesn’t care, adopted her because they couldn’t have kids and she is maids daughter, maid died in labor). Her father has a drinking problem because he was in love with the maid but she chose another poor man therefore he hates Juliette but his wife wanted to keep her because she wanted children. Vlad has been close to falling in love many times but always had to run before people realized he was immortal therefore never had the chance to fall in true love.
CONCEPT:
The immortals only “power” is to teleport, which takes a minute to do giving enemies time to kill them. This can also drastically weaken them. They can teleport someone else as well if they hold that persons blood in their hands.
Agratius creates immortals every full moon because it gives him enough strength to evade dreams (finds good people and turns them in their dream). The longer they are immortal the meaner they get until there is no life or soul left in them and all they want to do is kill (takes about 300 years to have no soul).
Only way for Agratius to not turn to ash in the underworld (burn) is to create an immortal every full moon, he also needs their souls to feed on.
Hunters try to find and kill all immortals (which can be detected with a crystal sphere that was invented by a crazy man (Vlad’s ancestor) in 1542). The crystal sphere lets out a high pitched noise when near an immortal that only the person holding it can hear.
Vlad’s father was the lead hunter, and this is why he knew about Agratius and other hunters, he was supposed to be the next lead hunter. He was not at home when they were killed and that was why he didn’t die in the first place.
The only way to speak to Agratius is to go to a loved ones’ grave on a full moon and say “Agratius, I know you are with us, I know that you live, I beg for a word with you, I swear I will give” and he will appear in your mind as you black out (in a dream like state).
Vlad’s family was murdered partially because immortals had no soul left in them and also because his father had the sphere because it was passed down to generations and Agratius sent them to steal it, but he had hid it away and they never found it.