This is my attempted blurb for my YA/Teen novel, entitled Mirage in the Desert. Please give honest opinions and constructive comments! Thank you!
Two completely different teens whom don’t see the existence of the fact that their feelings for each other are mutual fall in love. Each regards the other as the Mirage in their Desert. But will their mirage ever come true?
Carla Jones, a rebellious fifteen-year-old wealthy teen is new in a boarding school. After bumping (literally!) into him, she falls in love with Caine Bennett, a boy who is being abused by his step-father, and whom cannot escape the chain of neglect and ill-treatment. Follow the duo as they, together with a group of good friends, slowly unravel the whole mystery behind what seemed like a simple case of abuse, and realise that things are not always what they seem.
Two completely different teens whom don’t see the existence of the fact that their feelings for each other are mutual fall in love. Each regards the other as the Mirage in their Desert. But will their mirage ever come true?
Carla Jones, a rebellious fifteen-year-old wealthy teen is new in a boarding school. After bumping (literally!) into him, she falls in love with Caine Bennett, a boy who is being abused by his step-father, and whom cannot escape the chain of neglect and ill-treatment. Follow the duo as they, together with a group of good friends, slowly unravel the whole mystery behind what seemed like a simple case of abuse, and realise that things are not always what they seem.