would you read and critique; a poem for the lovers and those heartbroken as well?

Brother Ali

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They say a rose petal falls for every love lost

Love, is the ultimate story; and my writing will last

Through the hardships, despair, and cries; this is something surely i won't regret

As much as I can't speak at least I'm enjoying the feeling; because love rips my heart and heals it

A million lies were told to you, will you still love me?

Remember, my love is the truth; imprison it love; before it sets free

I can't bear the fear of hate and the loss of words

Lets fly away to no particular destination, spreading our wings just like the birds

Wherever we are we'll stay forever, because time forgets, and eventually, forgives

in.jean.ious
 
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