would you rate my poem?

[.emron. .awesome.]

Forgive me
forget me
the things ive said
i mean
i mean nothing
no good to come
of my dead soul
to longer visible
to eyes
of passerbys
a single ghost
of a once living
memory

forgive me
but please
forget me
forever a ghost
nothing more
no outline
no trace
a forgotten soul
with eyes of defeat
a reflection of failure
i know
i'll never be enough
i know it isnt very good.