I have this idea for my novel:
The Betrothal*
Livy has always known she was destined to marry someone.
But that someone just happens to be destined for her since birth.
When they were both born, their parents were best friends, and betrothed their children to marry eachother someday.
But here's the catch. Both children were never allowed to know eachother until they are 21. But as time goes by, Livy's mother dies, from a sickness when she's eight. and Luke, the guy she's destined to marry, moves away with his parents.
Livy doesn't know what to do.
____
The story takes place when livy is 22 and in college,
she finds that life is being quite difficult for her, since she's going through everything.
Until, she remembers about the betrothal when she was young, but it seems to all come back to her,in more ways than others.
what do you think, is it too cheesy?
it has a VERY surprising ending, but im not gonna give it away*
The Betrothal*
Livy has always known she was destined to marry someone.
But that someone just happens to be destined for her since birth.
When they were both born, their parents were best friends, and betrothed their children to marry eachother someday.
But here's the catch. Both children were never allowed to know eachother until they are 21. But as time goes by, Livy's mother dies, from a sickness when she's eight. and Luke, the guy she's destined to marry, moves away with his parents.
Livy doesn't know what to do.
____
The story takes place when livy is 22 and in college,
she finds that life is being quite difficult for her, since she's going through everything.
Until, she remembers about the betrothal when she was young, but it seems to all come back to her,in more ways than others.
what do you think, is it too cheesy?
it has a VERY surprising ending, but im not gonna give it away*