Would you comment on my poem thanks.?

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How you doing today?
hope your feeling fine,
would love to hear
what you dream of,
would love to tell you mine.

I don't know
but I guess we're
much the same,
feeding on the good times,
laughing off the pain.

Putting on performance
as we close the sanctuary door,
shielding true emotions
for the bread of daily chore.

But how you doing today?
hope your feeling fine,
life is just a moment,
so live before you die.
 
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