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The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
Perhaps not personally, but I would give it a shot :)

It seems like quite a good idea, not as original as some things I've read and maybe a little to babyish, but it sounds interesting.
 
Hmm ...

The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
parent of a kid that age? After five years of misery in an all-girls orphanage with only one friend, twelve-year-old Alyssa Norris discovers her new power to make animals speak. When a zoo truck stops near the orphanage, a monkey invites her to escape to Africa to live with a family. Alyssa agrees to go, flees Canada, and arrives in Tanzania, where she meets the family. After she disobeys a demand, the family punishes her and temporarily leaves Alyssa all alone. Luckily, a friendly cheetah suggests a tour of the landscape. Alyssa agrees and encounters many intense, risky, and wild surprises with the zoo truck animals.
 
Hmm ...

The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
Hmm ...

The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
Hmm ...

The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
no the words misery and punishment would put me off.

I have a sister who is 11 and she would not read something like that. She prefers more challenging books, and books about history (horrible histories mind but still)

Somehow i think that would be suited to a younger age group. perhaps 7 to 9?

Its too details for a blurb.
 
Hmm ...

The idea of a girl who makes animals speak is really interesting.But I would change the plot to something more intriguing, yet more educating for the kids that age .

For example : What I would do is, instead of a zoo truck, I would use a circus.Then I would make the MC make animals speak and they would let her know of the problems they are facing (don't tell me that you don't know how cruel they treat animals at the circus).

Then, Alyssa would try to convince people that animals should not be treated this way and that they should receive love from humans etc etc ... (external twists are your job).

This way, we have a children's book, which definitely educates kids and teaches them how to love animals.I find this (or anything similar to this) a good idea.

I dunno, it's up to you. Just think about it, and decide what is best.
But, either way, I would definitely buy your book if it was for my child, because it is such an interesting idea ... :)
 
no the words misery and punishment would put me off.

I have a sister who is 11 and she would not read something like that. She prefers more challenging books, and books about history (horrible histories mind but still)

Somehow i think that would be suited to a younger age group. perhaps 7 to 9?

Its too details for a blurb.
 
no the words misery and punishment would put me off.

I have a sister who is 11 and she would not read something like that. She prefers more challenging books, and books about history (horrible histories mind but still)

Somehow i think that would be suited to a younger age group. perhaps 7 to 9?

Its too details for a blurb.
 
Perhaps not personally, but I would give it a shot :)

It seems like quite a good idea, not as original as some things I've read and maybe a little to babyish, but it sounds interesting.
 
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