Would you be kind and read my first poem?

Where are you?

Who's like God? Where are you? My hero, mighty Knight,
Warrior, LionHeart, my sweet king, my fighter,
My angel, my eagle, of such great caliber
No one can fly as high, no one can so hard fight

Who's like God? No one can dive so deep, my fearless
Scout of the unknown lands, remaining unsmitten,
Your courage, your prowess, your deeds are unforgotten
To the end, your battles, so many, and countless.

Who's like God? Where are you? Whisper your love, my dear
Let me hear unspoken words in my eager ear,
In my heart, in my soul. I blow you a sweet kiss,

In the dark of the night, in the light of midday;
Your blue eyes see all things, here and there, anyway.
You're dancing, you're resting, forever, in full bliss.

sk
It is a sonnet, with some rhymes that follow one another, some are "embracing". I've tried following classical tradition.
 
Are you sure it is your first poem? It seems very good to me.
It also seems to be a tribute to a person dear to the author.

I think it is very enigmatic, and could be clarified. But obviously you, or someone who helped you, have tried.
It is a very original love poem. congrat's
 
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