TITLE: God Quest
BLURB: Ten thousand years ago, Jerome (the one men call God) created the human race to take care of his home world as he was feeling bored. He needed a change, a chance to visit other words and do something fun instead...Well, instead of being God! Thus, he created Men and departed for greener pastures. However, upon his return he soon discovers that things are not quite as he had left them. Magic now thrives all over the earth, especially Black Magic. Human magicians are the ruling force of the Realm and wars are common place. The world is in chaos. As if that isn't bad enough, Jerome soon discovers that the world will self-distruct from the amount of violence and corruption that is bleeding the land dry. As he expected, he is the only one who can stop it. Unfortunately, the moment he entered the Realm (domain of the mortals), he lost all his godliness save for his powers. They are far greater than any one magician but are they great enough? In fact, are they great enough to save him from becoming lost in his fate? For he quickly finds out that mortal men desire mortal women and this hunger might just become his own undoing!
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Well, that's about it. I'm working on a plot-outline for the story and have a vague idea how he will save the world. It's kind of like a Frankenstein thing only the world isn't really a monster. Not everyone's bad but a lot of people are. He's not immortal but a powerful magician. Of course, he learns that there are other guys both good and evil of an equal rank in magical prowess as he. So what do you think? Would this story blurb intrigue you? Would you want to read the rest of the book? Also, I have a pretty solid idea on how he will save the day but I could use some advice. So if you have any thoughts on this matter, please state them. I could really use your help.
Thanks a ton in advance!
BLURB: Ten thousand years ago, Jerome (the one men call God) created the human race to take care of his home world as he was feeling bored. He needed a change, a chance to visit other words and do something fun instead...Well, instead of being God! Thus, he created Men and departed for greener pastures. However, upon his return he soon discovers that things are not quite as he had left them. Magic now thrives all over the earth, especially Black Magic. Human magicians are the ruling force of the Realm and wars are common place. The world is in chaos. As if that isn't bad enough, Jerome soon discovers that the world will self-distruct from the amount of violence and corruption that is bleeding the land dry. As he expected, he is the only one who can stop it. Unfortunately, the moment he entered the Realm (domain of the mortals), he lost all his godliness save for his powers. They are far greater than any one magician but are they great enough? In fact, are they great enough to save him from becoming lost in his fate? For he quickly finds out that mortal men desire mortal women and this hunger might just become his own undoing!
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Well, that's about it. I'm working on a plot-outline for the story and have a vague idea how he will save the world. It's kind of like a Frankenstein thing only the world isn't really a monster. Not everyone's bad but a lot of people are. He's not immortal but a powerful magician. Of course, he learns that there are other guys both good and evil of an equal rank in magical prowess as he. So what do you think? Would this story blurb intrigue you? Would you want to read the rest of the book? Also, I have a pretty solid idea on how he will save the day but I could use some advice. So if you have any thoughts on this matter, please state them. I could really use your help.
Thanks a ton in advance!