Would this -still- be copy-right (or plagiarism)?

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I was having trouble with an acrostic so I found this and mixed it up:

(Original by some poet.. Can't remember his name)
Perpetual urges of the flesh
Ancient fire of desire rekindled
Soaring sensuality's surfacing
Satisfaction craved and found
Innermost fantasies needing fulfillment
Oneness of two souls and bods divined
Nature taking its course forcefully

(Mine)
Persistent yearnings of (or from... of makes more sense) the flesh
Ancient fire of desire rekindled
Sensualities arising
Satisfaction craved and found
Innermost fantasies needing to be attained
Oneness of two souls divined
Nature taking its course vigorously



It's for my english class... I just want a good grade. (Is it too sexual for tenth grade. To me it's not but then again I am seventeen. I was held back when I moved to Spain from the US)
 
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