Girl on Fire
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So this little scene for part of a book idea that's been bouncing around in my head for a while now. I haven't actually started writing the book yet, but I was motivated to write this little bit. After I wrote it, I thought it might be a good blurb on a back of a book if I'm lucky enough to get published! Otherwise, it'll be my long pitch on Inkpop. 
Josh snickered. "You thought I was fallen?"
"Well," I started, "it seems like nowadays every time there's a dark, mysterious hot guy at a new school, he's a fallen angel. At least, that's how it is in every book I've read in a while."
He stopped laughing altogether, but Josh looked like he was in pain. Probably biting his tongue. He took a second to absorb what I said, and then the smile started creeping back up his face.
"What?" I pressed. "What'd I do?"
"You think I'm hot?"
I slapped my forehead, then covered my face with my hands. My cheeks were surely as red as Josh's front door.
@Daniella: Haha, I know exactly what you mean. I actually read a book where the blurb had some stuff cut out of it.
It's not explicitly romance. If it was in context it would make more sense.
Josh snickered. "You thought I was fallen?"
"Well," I started, "it seems like nowadays every time there's a dark, mysterious hot guy at a new school, he's a fallen angel. At least, that's how it is in every book I've read in a while."
He stopped laughing altogether, but Josh looked like he was in pain. Probably biting his tongue. He took a second to absorb what I said, and then the smile started creeping back up his face.
"What?" I pressed. "What'd I do?"
"You think I'm hot?"
I slapped my forehead, then covered my face with my hands. My cheeks were surely as red as Josh's front door.
@Daniella: Haha, I know exactly what you mean. I actually read a book where the blurb had some stuff cut out of it.
It's not explicitly romance. If it was in context it would make more sense.