The wind howled like wolves, as I stepped closer to Samuel.
" No, no ,no you don't want to do that". He said waving his long bony finger in the air.
" I can help you, cross you over, I'm tired of you haunting me". I felt the tears running down my face.
" Elvira, I'm not done with you I've been dead for 200 years and I have waited for this moment, to take your life and keep it as my own." His sinister eyes burned through me as he looked me up and down.
" Every 10 years a new person like you is born and someone like me trys to find you and takes your place." He looked down and stepped forward.
" Your not going to take my life, im not going to be a demon like you." I looked for anything that I can defend myself with.
" Guardians tired to hide you but your light was to bright for it to hide in the dark, and I've killed people for you so this is the time I've dreamed of ." He stopped his hair turned dark black, and he lifted his head his eyes were bright red, his skin as white as snow. He gave me a little smile his teeth had stains of blood and all of them danger shaped.
" He'll will find you, and make you suffer." I couldn't breathe, my knees made me feel like I was going to fall, my hands shaking , and my body stiffened.
" Your little boyfriend will never know your missing" He grabbed my shoulders and pushed me down. My head fell uponed a rock squrting blood along the bushes and fallen logs.
" Good night Elvira" Samuel closed my eyes and I slowly drifted away.
And plz help improve it plz
" No, no ,no you don't want to do that". He said waving his long bony finger in the air.
" I can help you, cross you over, I'm tired of you haunting me". I felt the tears running down my face.
" Elvira, I'm not done with you I've been dead for 200 years and I have waited for this moment, to take your life and keep it as my own." His sinister eyes burned through me as he looked me up and down.
" Every 10 years a new person like you is born and someone like me trys to find you and takes your place." He looked down and stepped forward.
" Your not going to take my life, im not going to be a demon like you." I looked for anything that I can defend myself with.
" Guardians tired to hide you but your light was to bright for it to hide in the dark, and I've killed people for you so this is the time I've dreamed of ." He stopped his hair turned dark black, and he lifted his head his eyes were bright red, his skin as white as snow. He gave me a little smile his teeth had stains of blood and all of them danger shaped.
" He'll will find you, and make you suffer." I couldn't breathe, my knees made me feel like I was going to fall, my hands shaking , and my body stiffened.
" Your little boyfriend will never know your missing" He grabbed my shoulders and pushed me down. My head fell uponed a rock squrting blood along the bushes and fallen logs.
" Good night Elvira" Samuel closed my eyes and I slowly drifted away.
And plz help improve it plz
Possibly the best sample I have read on Y!A yet