Will you read this short poem and review it for me?

[Eye of Amalek]

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Somewhere in the dark the secret lies
Rolling back and forth, around and around
I know it's here, and before my eyes
It lays silent and still without a sound

Hush, is that it? I may hear it now.
Quietly, lest it move, I slow my pace
It appears to be ready to allow
A new adept up the staircase

Existing in a circle on the floor
Pushing those guarding heaven's gate
A trial for a week to find the door
It creeks open and I see my fate.

 

[imported_krissi poppy]

I like the form. the poem seems to be about a spiritual trial that you will go through I encourage you to go.

 

[charming grenade]

i like it ...it sounds mysterious and dark ...makes me wanna be a ninja

 

[krissi poppy]

I like the form. the poem seems to be about a spiritual trial that you will go through I encourage you to go.