Will you please rate my poem on a scale of 9-34?

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The heart so full of love!
Trash
collecting, see, personified by being
full of love
the aimless descriptor love
love love my poetry to be full of good
things, like flowers and sunsets over the sea!
Will you be telling me
of these wonderful events,
so I can BE THERE,
yeah,
who put you here?

We can go for a picnic among
the swaying oak branches
in tall grass or snowbanks,
whichever makes you aware
of where you
are
do you see the beauty of color?
Of course you do,
silly.
 
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