Will This Make a good story ?

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It is about a familey with nine kids and the parents got devorced and there is a snotty step sis and i dont know what else also what would be a good twist
 
Your story not ours

be original

maybe look to your own life

Sounds a bit like cinderella, . . mixed with cheaper by the dozen
 
one good kid has to kill another child on accident and the snotty girl is rewarded with trust for ratting the good kid out all while the other kid is somewhat shunned
 
you have to make this really funny like cheaper by the dozen. Good luck with a twist!
 
a good twist would be to make the snotty step sis die doing something real heroic like saving one of their lives or something, then they all feel bad and question themselves......and they get over it and let it go.....
 
hahah its ounds pretty good to me! just dont make it too melodramatic and it should turn out great :)
 
um...9 kids attack snotty step sister to unite the parents so that they will fall in love again. lol.
 
yes and a good twist is that the parents arent really devorced and the kids dont know it
 
idk maybe the step sister is dating one of the brothers because shes not offically blood! that would be awesome id buy that
 
I think it would make a good story, but there are so many books and movies dealing with that situation.
 
An extra brother that no one knew about would be a good twist. That is a good story eiter way.
 
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